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She KnewShe kissed him and she knew,That he was definitely the one.Wrapped up in him,She knew she was safe.Held by his caring hands,No harm could be done to her.She knew she wanted him.No one else was better for her.The two of them,Were meant to be together.She knew it.He knew it.They both knew it ♥
Be That BoyI want you to be that boy...The one who cares about me,The one who calls me beautiful,The one who would never hurt me.Be the guy who loves me for me,Who won't try to change me.Be the boy who will love me with no restrictions,And protect me.I want you to be the boy that...Kisses me on the eyelids,Holds my hand in public,And enjoys my company.Be the guy who helps me recover,Form my past.Help me through struggles in life,And I'll help you through yours.Be the one I want to hold,And never let go.I will be the one you want to hold,And never let go.
Repairing My HeartHe walks around every day,With my heart in his pocket.It's all broken up,Into sharp, jagged pieces.But little by little,Each and every day,Even if he doesn't know it,He's taping it back together,And stitching up the scars.
Trust MeYou can tell me anything,And I will keept it safe.Trust me to keep your secret,It'll all work out alright.I know I can trust you,So I hope you can trust me.I won't tell anyone anything,I know how to keep a secret.
The DayThe day they fell in love,Was the best day of their lives.She dreams about him day and night,Wanting to be by his side.He's yearning for her touch,For his lips to meet hers.She wants her hand in his,His comforting arms around her.He thinks she's the most beautiful thing,He's ever laid eyes on.This was the day they fell in love,The greatest day of their lives.Because they were meant,To be together.
Crazy In LoveBeing in love,Can give you a rush,That nothing else can.That warm, fuzzy feeling,Doesn't come from everyday things,Like TV or sports.The wanting to hold the other person,Can only occur,If you're truly in love.That feeling you get when you see them,And no matter how hard you try,You can't help but smile.Being crazy in love,Is one of the greatest feelings,In the whole world.
My One Love Part Eight"Aww man," I complained "it's raining." The rain poured down on us in a heavy sheet.It had been Colton's turn to come meet my parents, who approved a lot quicker than I imagined. After dinner, we had decided to walk around my neighborhood, but eventually ended up at the park instead. There was a park across the street from my house where we had Freshmen Field Day last year. Everytime I go there, I picture the whole park filled with my schoolmates. What I remember most about that day was Blaze and Greggory spinning me around in a swing, I was screaming so loud. It was awesome.We had just gotten to the park, and we were sitting under the pavilion on a table. It was cold and cloudy, and I was shivering like crazy."Dear God, it's cold!" I chattered. I was freaking freezing. Colton wrapped his arms around me and pulled me closer."Warming up yet?" he asked. I actually was. He gave off a lot of body heat for a pale dude."Hey Bailey?" Colton wondered, "I have a question.""Yeah?""Have yo
My One Love Part OneHe stared at her from across the rotunda. She was laughing at a perverted joke one of her friends had made, and a bright smile had spread across her face. She turned and hugged one of her friends. She nearly fell to the ground laughing.He was dying to ask her out. He knew that she liked him too, and if he asked her out, she'd say yes in a heartbeat. But he was too scared to say those six little words-will you go out with me.He thought maybe he could get one of his friends to do it. But she didn't like his friends, she would never believe them. He could have one of her friends do it, but she would think they were just trying to screw with her head. If he tried, she would think that one of his friends dared him to do it just to see her cry. He didn't want to see her cry. He wanted to hold her every night and tell her how much he loves her. He wanted to hug her when she needed comforting and tell her she was beautiful, even when she felt her worst. But none of that was going to happen u
For You...I was assigned to her by life.As I drank wineFrom the same goblet as Christ.I was promised eternal life.And yet I'll die tomorrowProtecting her heart.[Think of me as the skylineThe moon to your starsI wont be a memoryBut the ghost of a smile.]Youll see that mankindFollows-stalks natures pathThe perfection of being in loveThe bliss of finding an ever white fantasyEver thought about me?Your dreams I'll keep aliveEver sang to me?I'll entwine happiness in the seasWithin your steps mankind shall liveKeep the faith alive.[Think of me as the skylineEnough to become a memoryMy honest heart will heal youThe pains and sorrows will waneI'll think of you every single day]24 hours of lifeA cold baren land brings me deathThe iris of her eyesMy ever glowing warmthAnd in her face I seePerfection of a night-skiesStary fantasy.For the life I gave up for thee.[Think of me as the skylineThe ghost of a memoryThe faint smile in your tearsThe fading ghost: TimeI shall be